Hmmm~

Jared Hudson... Where have I heard that before?
Ah, yes... your "Town Square" song... I totally have that on my ipod.
-Nod.-
You should do more music too.
Really good ideas and really well pulled off. You deserved that front page...

W00tage.

Actually, I wrote Scene 2 of the script. >_>;
(With the spelling. ;D)
Don't forget that.

Nicely done.

Nice. A few things wrong with it, but I'm sure they're no scratch on the greatness of this piece.
Keep it up.

Mmm... Art is something to be understood, enjoyed, and mused upon. With this, I did none of the aforementioned.
I think you chose semiotic devices somewhat badly, and the feel of the game was clunky and counter-intuitive. During the fall, I first thought I was supposed to re-ascend and spent a good while jumping on stars to try and get back up. While this could have been your intent, I'm not so sure about the clouds. The whole thing just felt... meh, in general.
Not terrible; it's better than I could program, but you still have a way to go.

Not at all bad.

Loving the retro style, unless this is a game ripped and reposted from decades ago... but... what the hell is with the Totenham Hotspurs comments?
Makes no sense.
Still, not at all bad.

Like it.

I like the idea that you're supposed to cure as opposed to infect, it's different for the series. Oh, and I got 0 healthy, all the rest as immune... yet no win? How am I supposed to win? :l